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I have learnt about Remembrance Day or Poppy Day. I don't know it before and it is really interesting, because we don't have such in my native country.

I would like to learn more about Thanksgiving. I would like what type of food is offered to guests.

Canadian culture is considered typical western culture. This week I have learnt what is the white lies and why people would like to maintain white lies rather than say it straightforward, when they interact with each other, No matter stranger or in a familiar relationship. I'm comfortable with give compliment to strange people, because of human always like positive feedback. I would considered this kind of behave as a empathy behviours. What am i not comfortable with is white lies were overused so that it's hard to initiate a deep conversation , that would be result in harmful relationship.

I have learnt a lot about Memorial Day in Canada, as known Remembrance Day. It's a national holiday observed on November 11th. One of the iconic symbol of Remembrance Day is red poppy flower, which is worn as a symbol respect and remembrance. It brings to mind Ukraine's own Day of Remembrance, a day of reflection and tribute to those who have sacrificed for our county.

I learned the white lies. it's a very interesting culture. It is very helpful for me to learn English, because, even if there are a lot of mistakes in what I say, they don't laugh at me, which makes me feel good.

Actually The white lies in Canada culture same my hometown and I really like that because When u use White lies with friends and family u avoid conflict and tenish and keep friendship and relationship ,And second one is a freedom for women and all pepole ,and one thing im not comfortable with is strictness about drive license I dont like that because i have 7 yeras experiences about driving and here im not accept for G full

White lies and Remember Days. I think this white lies are useful. friendly and peacefully. Remember Days make us happy and we learn about Canadian culture.

i think whit lie somtims neccary for suport emotioanally somone who upset and we should be try to destroying misunderstanding in my opinion canadian cultur its comfortable for me and near to my country culture.

I have learnt about Remembrance Day or Poppy Day. I don’t know it before and it is really interesting, because we don’t have such in my country.

Canadian culture is considered typical western culture. This week I have learnt what is the white lies and why people would like to maintain white lies rather than say it straightforward, when they interact with each other, No matter stranger or in a familiar relationship. I'm comfortable with give compliment to strange people, because of human always like positive feedback. I would considered this kind of behave as a empathy behviours. What am i not comfortable with is white lies were overused so that it's hard to initiate a deep conversation , that would be result in harmful relationship.

This week I have learned about white lies, how to make excuses and about the meaning of Remembrance Day.

I was very pleased to study the historyof the referent of the day, the features of the mentality of Canada

I really enjoy the game "Two lie one true" with my team, the game helps us know more about each other

I would have you learn more about Thanksgiving. I would like what type of food is offered to guests.

We learned about the Canadian War Memorial Day. Every November 11th, people wear red poppy flowers on their chests to express condolences and deep remembrance for the brave soldiers who sacrificed themselves in the war. I feel that this culture is very good. Heroic soldiers have exchanged their own blood for peace. We must always remember their heroic deeds and pass them down from generation to generation.

It's been an interesting week. We learned about "Remembrance Day", worked with different kind of mistakes, discussed the importance and problems associated with "White lies" , and learned how to write "Excuses". There were a lot of new vocabulary words for me, because of this I experienced difficulties.

absent before

A new student here,thank you.

ChatGPT's Corrections:

Certainly, here are the sentences with corrections using brackets:

1. "I have learnt about Remembrance Day or Poppy Day. I don't know it before and it is really interesting, because we don't have such in my native country."

   • Correction: "I have learnt about Remembrance Day or Poppy Day. [I don't know it before,] and it is really interesting, because we don't have such in my native country."

2. "I would like to learn more about Thanksgiving. I would like what type of food is offered to guests."

   • Correction: "I would like to learn more about Thanksgiving. [I would like to know what type of food is offered to guests.]"

3. "Canadian culture is considered typical western culture. This week I have learnt what is the white lies and why people would like to maintain white lies rather than say it straightforward, when they interact with each other, No matter stranger or in a familiar relationship. I'm comfortable with give compliment to strange people, because of human always like positive feedback. I would considered this kind of behave as a empathy behviours. What am i not comfortable with is white lies were overused so that it's hard to initiate a deep conversation , that would be result in harmful relationship."

   • Correction: "Canadian culture is considered typical western culture. This week I have learnt what [white lies are] and why people would like to maintain white lies rather than say it straightforward, when they interact with each other, [No matter stranger or in a familiar relationship.] I'm comfortable with [giving compliments to strange people,] because [humans always like positive feedback.] I would considered this kind of behave as [empathy behaviors.] What [I am not comfortable with is when white lies are overused so that it's hard to initiate a deep conversation; that would result in harmful relationships.]"

4. "I have learnt a lot about Memorial Day in Canada, as known Remembrance Day. It's a national holiday observed on November 11th. One of the iconic symbol of Remembrance Day is red poppy flower, which is worn as a symbol respect and remembrance. It brings to mind Ukraine's own Day of Remembrance, a day of reflection and tribute to those who have sacrificed for our county."

   • Correction: "I have learnt a lot about Memorial Day in Canada, [also known as Remembrance Day.] It's a national holiday observed on November 11th. One of the iconic [symbols of Remembrance Day is the red poppy flower,] which is worn as a symbol [of respect and remembrance.]"

I hope this helps!

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Certainly, here are the remaining sentences with corrections using brackets:

5. "I learned the white lies. it's a very interesting culture. It is very helpful for me to learn English, because, even if there are a lot of mistakes in what I say, they don't laugh at me, which makes me feel good."

   • Correction: "I learned [about] white lies. [It's] a very interesting culture. It is very helpful for me to learn English, because, even if there are a lot of mistakes in what I say, they don't laugh at me, which makes me feel good."

6. "Actually The white lies in Canada culture same my hometown and I really like that because When u use White lies with friends and family u avoid conflict and tenish and keep friendship and relationship ,And second one is a freedom for women and all pepole ,and one thing im not comfortable with is strictness about drive license I dont like that because i have 7 yeras experiences about driving and here im not accept for G full"

   • Correction: "Actually, [the white lies in Canadian culture are the same as] my hometown [and I really like that] because [when you use white lies with friends and family,] you avoid conflict and [tension] and [maintain] friendship and relationship. [And the] second one is [the] freedom for women and all [people,] and one thing [I'm] not comfortable with is [the] strictness about [driver's] license. [I don't] like that because [I have 7 years of experience in] driving, and here [I'm] not [accepted] for [a] G full."

7. "White lies and Remember Days. I think this white lies are useful. friendly and peacefully. Remember Days make us happy and we learn about Canadian culture."

   • Correction: "[White lies and] Remember Days. I think [white lies are] useful, [friendly,] and [peaceful]. [Remember Days make us happy] and [help us learn about Canadian culture.]"

8. "i think whit lie somtims neccary for suport emotioanally somone who upset and we should be try to destroying misunderstanding in my opinion canadian cultur its comfortable for me and near to my country culture."

   • Correction: "[I think white lies] sometim[es] [are necessary] for [supporting] [someone] who [is] upset, and we should [try to] [resolve] misunderstanding. In my opinion, [Canadian culture is] comfortable for me and [similar] to my country's culture."

9. "I have learnt about Remembrance Day or Poppy Day. I don’t know it before and it is really interesting, because we don’t have such in my country."

   • Correction: "I have learnt about Remembrance Day [or Poppy Day.] [I didn't] know [about it] before, and it is really interesting, because we don't have such [a day] in my country."

10. "Canadian culture is considered typical western culture. This week I have learnt what is the white lies and why people would like to maintain white lies rather than say it straightforward, when they interact with each other, No matter stranger or in a familiar relationship. I'm comfortable with give compliment to strange people, because of human always like positive feedback. I would considered this kind of behave as a empathy behviours. What am i not comfortable with is white lies were overused so that it's hard to initiate a deep conversation , that would be result in harmful relationship."

    • Correction: "This week I have learned about [white lies,] how to make excuses[,] and about the meaning of Remembrance Day."

11. "I was very pleased to study the historyof the referent of the day, the features of the mentality of Canada"

    • Correction: "I was very pleased to study [the history of] the referent [of] the day, [the features of] the mentality of Canada."

12. "I really enjoy the game "Two lie one true" with my team, the game helps us know more about each other"

    • Correction: "I really enjoy the game 'Two Lies and One Truth' with my team, [the game helps us know more about each other.]"

13. "I would have you learn more about Thanksgiving. I would like what type of food is offered to guests."

    • Correction: "I would have you learn more about Thanksgiving. [I would like to know what type of food is offered to guests.]"

14. "We learned about the Canadian War Memorial Day. Every November 11th, people wear red poppy flowers on their chests to express condolences and deep remembrance for the brave soldiers who sacrificed themselves in the war. I feel that this culture is very good. Heroic soldiers have exchanged their own blood for peace. We must always remember their heroic deeds and pass them down from generation to generation."

    • Correction: "We learned about [Canadian War Memorial Day.] [Every November 11th, people wear red poppy flowers on their chests to express condolences and deep remembrance for the brave soldiers who sacrificed themselves in the war.] I feel that this culture is very [commendable.] Heroic soldiers have exchanged their own blood for peace. We must always remember their heroic deeds and pass them down from generation to generation."

15. "It's been an interesting week. We learned about "Remembrance Day", worked with different kind of mistakes, discussed the importance and problems associated with "White lies" , and learned how to write "Excuses". There were a lot of new vocabulary words for me, because of this I experienced difficulties."

    • Correction: "It's been an interesting week. We learned about 'Remembrance Day', worked with different kinds of mistakes, discussed the importance and problems associated with 'White Lies', and learned how to write 'Excuses'. There were a lot of new vocabulary words for me, because of this[,] I experienced difficulties."

16. "absent before"

    • Correction: "Absent before."

17. "A new student here,thank you."

    • Correction: "A new student here, thank you."

I hope this completes the corrections for you.

Original Text:

I would like to learn more about Thanksgiving. I would like what type of food is offered to guests.

Canadian culture is considered typical western culture. This week I have learnt what is the white lies and why people would like to maintain white lies rather than say it straightforward, when they interact with each other, No matter stranger or in a familiar relationship. I'm comfortable with give compliment to strange people, because of human always like positive feedback. I would considered this kind of behave as a empathy behviours. What am i not comfortable with is white lies were overused so that it's hard to initiate a deep conversation , that would be result in harmful relationship.

I have learnt a lot about Memorial Day in Canada, as known Remembrance Day. It's a national holiday observed on November 11th. One of the iconic symbol of Remembrance Day is red poppy flower, which is worn as a symbol respect and remembrance. It brings to mind Ukraine's own Day of Remembrance, a day of reflection and tribute to those who have sacrificed for our county.

I learned the white lies. it's a very interesting culture. It is very helpful for me to learn English, because, even if there are a lot of mistakes in what I say, they don't laugh at me, which makes me feel good.

Actually The white lies in Canada culture same my hometown and I really like that because When u use White lies with friends and family u avoid conflict and tenish and keep friendship and relationship ,And second one is a freedom for women and all pepole ,and one thing im not comfortable with is strictness about drive license I dont like that because i have 7 yeras experiences about driving and here im not accept for G full

White lies and Remember Days. I think this white lies are useful. friendly and peacefully. Remember Days make us happy and we learn about Canadian culture.

i think whit lie somtims neccary for suport emotioanally somone who upset and we should be try to destroying misunderstanding in my opinion canadian cultur its comfortable for me and near to my country culture.

I have learnt about Remembrance Day or Poppy Day. I don’t know it before and it is really interesting, because we don’t have such in my country.

Canadian culture is considered typical western culture. This week I have learnt what is the white lies and why people would like to maintain white lies rather than say it straightforward, when they interact with each other, No matter stranger or in a familiar relationship. I'm comfortable with give compliment to strange people, because of human always like positive feedback. I would considered this kind of behave as a empathy behviours. What am i not comfortable with is white lies were overused so that it's hard to initiate a deep conversation , that would be result in harmful relationship.

This week I have learned about white lies, how to make excuses and about the meaning of Remembrance Day.

I was very pleased to study the historyof the referent of the day, the features of the mentality of Canada

I really enjoy the game "Two lie one true" with my team, the game helps us know more about each other

I would have you learn more about Thanksgiving. I would like what type of food is offered to guests.

We learned about the Canadian War Memorial Day. Every November 11th, people wear red poppy flowers on their chests to express condolences and deep remembrance for the brave soldiers who sacrificed themselves in the war. I feel that this culture is very good. Heroic soldiers have exchanged their own blood for peace. We must always remember their heroic deeds and pass them down from generation to generation.

It's been an interesting week. We learned about "Remembrance Day", worked with different kind of mistakes, discussed the importance and problems associated with "White lies" , and learned how to write "Excuses". There were a lot of new vocabulary words for me, because of this I experienced difficulties.

absent before

A new student here,thank you.

ChatGPT when asked to "proofread the following using proofreader's marks":

Certainly! Here are the sentences with proofreaders' marks:

1. "I would like to learn more about Thanksgiving. I would like what type of food is offered to guests."

   • Correction: "I would like to learn more about Thanksgiving. Insert 'to know' after 'like' what type of food is offered to guests."

2. "Canadian culture is considered typical western culture. This week I have learnt what is the white lies and why people would like to maintain white lies rather than say it straightforward, when they interact with each other, No matter stranger or in a familiar relationship. I'm comfortable with give compliment to strange people, because of human always like positive feedback. I would considered this kind of behave as a empathy behviours. What am i not comfortable with is white lies were overused so that it's hard to initiate a deep conversation , that would be result in harmful relationship."

   • Correction: "Canadian culture is considered typical western culture. Remove 'is' after 'what', add 'are' after 'white lies'. This week I have learnt change 'learnt' to 'learned' what change 'is' to 'are' the white lies and why people would like to maintain white lies rather than say it straightforward, when they interact with each other, Insert 'no' before 'matter' matter stranger or in a familiar relationship. I'm comfortable with change 'give' to 'giving' compliment to strange people, because of change 'a' to 'an' before 'empathy' empathy behviours. What change 'am i' to 'I am' not comfortable with is white lies were overused so that it's hard to initiate a deep conversation , change 'that would be result' to 'resulting in' harmful relationship."

3. "I have learnt a lot about Memorial Day in Canada, as known Remembrance Day. It's a national holiday observed on November 11th. One of the iconic symbol of Remembrance Day is red poppy flower, which is worn as a symbol respect and remembrance. It brings to mind Ukraine's own Day of Remembrance, a day of reflection and tribute to those who have sacrificed for our county."

   • Correction: "I have learnt a lot about Memorial Day in Canada, also known as Remembrance Day. It's a national holiday observed on November 11th. One of the iconic symbols of Remembrance Day is the red poppy flower, which is worn as a symbol of respect and remembrance. It brings to mind Ukraine's own Day of Remembrance, a day of reflection and tribute to those who have sacrificed for our country."

4. "I learned the white lies. it's a very interesting culture. It is very helpful for me to learn English, because, even if there are a lot of mistakes in what I say, they don't laugh at me, which makes me feel good."

   • Correction: "I learned about white lies. It's a very interesting culture. It is very helpful for me to learn English, because, even if there are a lot of mistakes in what I say, they don't laugh at me, which makes me feel good."

5. "Actually The white lies in Canada culture same my hometown and I really like that because When u use White lies with friends and family u avoid conflict and tenish and keep friendship and relationship ,And second one is a freedom for women and all pepole ,and one thing im not comfortable with is strictness about drive license I dont like that because i have 7 yeras experiences about driving and here im not accept for G full"

   • Correction: "Actually, the white lies in Canadian culture are the same as my hometown , and I really like that because when you use white lies with friends and family , you avoid conflict and tension and maintain friendship and relationship. And the second one is the freedom for women and all people, and one thing I'm not comfortable with is the strictness about driver's license. I don't like that because I have 7 years of experience in driving, and here I'm not accepted for G full."

6. "White lies and Remember Days. I think this white lies are useful. friendly and peacefully. Remember Days make us happy and we learn about Canadian culture."

   • Correction: "White lies and Remembrance Days. I think white lies are useful, friendly, and peacefully. Remembrance Days make us happy and we learn about Canadian culture."

7. "i think whit lie somtims neccary for suport emotioanally somone who upset and we should be try to destroying misunderstanding in my opinion canadian cultur its comfortable for me and near to my country culture."

   • Correction: "I think white lie sometimes are necessary for supporting someone who is upset, and we should try to resolve misunderstanding. In my opinion, Canadian culture is comfortable for me and similar to my country's culture."

8. "I have learnt about Remembrance Day or Poppy Day. I don’t know it before and it is really interesting, because we don’t have such in my country."

   • Correction: "I have learnt about Remembrance Day , or Poppy Day. I didn't know about it before , and it is really interesting, because we don't have such a day in my country."

9. "Canadian culture is considered typical western culture. This week I have learnt what is the white lies and why people would like to maintain white lies rather than say it straightforward, when they interact with each other, No matter stranger or in a familiar relationship. I'm comfortable with give compliment to strange people, because of human always like positive feedback. I would considered this kind of behave as a empathy behviours. What am i not comfortable with is white lies were overused so that it's hard to initiate a deep conversation , that would be result in harmful relationship."

   • Correction: "This week I have learned about white lies, how to make excuses, and about the meaning of Remembrance Day."

10. "I was very pleased to study the historyof the referent of the day, the features of the mentality of Canada"

    • Correction: "I was very pleased to study the history of the referent of the day, the features of the mentality of Canada."

11. "I really enjoy the game "Two lie one true" with my team, the game helps us know more about each other"

    • Correction: "I really enjoy the game 'Two Lies and One Truth' with my team, ; the game helps us know more about each other."

12. "I would have you learn more about Thanksgiving. I would like what type of food is offered to guests."

    • Correction: "I would like you to learn more about Thanksgiving. I would like to know what type of food is offered to guests."

13. "We learned about the Canadian War Memorial Day. Every November 11th, people wear red poppy flowers on their chests to express condolences and deep remembrance for the brave soldiers who sacrificed themselves in the war. I feel that this culture is very good. Heroic soldiers have exchanged their own blood for peace. We must always remember their heroic deeds and pass them down from generation to generation."

    • Correction: "We learned about Canadian War Memorial Day. Every November 11th, people wear red poppy flowers on their chests to express condolences and deep remembrance for the brave soldiers who sacrificed themselves in the war. I feel that this culture is very commendable. Heroic soldiers have exchanged their own blood for peace. We must always remember their heroic deeds and pass them down from generation to generation."

14. "It's been an interesting week. We learned about "Remembrance Day", worked with different kind of mistakes, discussed the importance and problems associated with "White lies", and learned how to write "Excuses". There were a lot of new vocabulary words for me, because of this I experienced difficulties."

    • Correction: "It's been an interesting week. We learned about 'Remembrance Day', worked with different kinds of mistakes, discussed the importance and problems associated with 'White Lies', and learned how to write 'Excuses'. There were a lot of new vocabulary words for me, because of this, I experienced difficulties."

15. "absent before A new student here,thank you."

    • Correction: "Absent before. A new student here, thank you."